Saturday, October 6, 2012

MY FIRST STORY

This is the story about Sam and his pet, Toby and how they found each other, one more time. It is written for children but I hope teenagers, and adults enjoy it, too. My loyal friend on Storybird

1 comment:

  1. Tatiana,
    I loved your story very much! I recommend you to focus on coherences, the idea is to improve your writing skills and your vocabulary...You need to use phrasal verbs. They are very useful in some of your pictures!
    Have a nice time.
    Your English teacher.

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